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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-09-20 05:55 AM



The scent of sap is on the air,
autumn's decay has already begun.
Colder days of sunshine and shadow,
brilliantly beam onto the land.

Sitting alone, absorbing natures
colour, sounds, texture and beauty,
my mind calm but dark, my
connections to the season important.

Light green fields fade to brown,
trees tinged with golden sunrays,
slow white clouds pass above in skies
of crystal blue, where droning planes echo.

Early evening wind hisses
through overhanging willow trees,
sunlight shines on rippling lakes
like electrified sidewinders in water.

The day draws down, the nights
arrive sooner, but nature will
always be with me, mear me.
Autumn has stepped into my soul.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-09-20 06:28 AM


And your soul has beautiful colors...vermillion red for love....golden..for kindness and honesty...and flame orange ...for the brilliant mind....

I like kissing your soul.....and getting all the colors of autumn on my lips...

Love ~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2004-09-20 07:01 AM


Sitting alone, absorbing natures
colour, sounds, texture and beauty,
my mind calm but dark, my
connections to the season important.


I believe you have painted one of my most favortie passtimes....this was a joy to read.  Thank you

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2004-09-20 07:45 AM


ARH...i had other things on my mind too while i was writing in the slence of the day...i think you know what..thank you..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxx

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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4 posted 2004-09-20 07:46 AM


Lee thank you so much for your reply..glad i painted a picture you could enjoy...

Goldenrose.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-09-20 09:13 AM


"Autumn has stepped into my soul."

~ Splendidly poetic! Absolutely loved this memorable line!

May your autumn be as rich and satisfying as the one you of which you have so eloquently written!

Happy autumn hugs,
EA

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