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Open Poetry #33

Spontaneous Gifts

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-09-19 10:54 PM

Impetuous
The thin of shadow play
Falling gently and away
Where we began
But a smile and a brush of thigh
Caresses tease the mind
Heightening all points in northern sensations
Willingly undressing any futile complications
And in my sleep escapes this wonder
Envisions I am aching under
And traveling the tributaries
Blushed upon my lips within your palm
To speak against your heart this psalm
The echo running on my skin as dew
As all I am in love with you

Copyright Kkh 9/19/04

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2004-09-19 11:39 PM

How beautiful! Loved the last two lines.

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

2 posted 2004-09-20 12:08 PM

yikes, is this PG-13?? hhee, very nice

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-09-20 11:24 AM

"As all I am in love with you"

~ I enjoyed the feelings of wholeness and completeness that you have conveyed in this poem of love.

As you love, so may you be loved!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-09-20 12:15 PM

a sacred gift you have described here, and very well, I might add...lovely

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2004-09-20 12:18 PM

ooooweee
tis lovely

Where's my fan, she said flushing.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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