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The Sunset (a tanka)
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The Sunset (a tanka) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ Watching the sunset With loving arms around me Simply warms my heart As you hold me close to you I can feel your heartbeat, too 9-19-04 |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Enjoyed  I love these more "uncommon" poetic forms.and then He created the horse... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A moment in time...  May this lovely write truly be a reflection of your reality, Sweet Sue! Warm-hearted hugs! Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetSuzieQ~ This is simply LOVELY ... and in PERFECT form~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely Sue!!! Well done and much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I can just feel the warmth of the sunset glowing in my heart... This is beautiful... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, A nice way to "let the sun go down". If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
certainly nice to be a part of, thank you for the warmth of your words and the view of your sunsets....smiles and hugs |
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