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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-09-19 08:37 AM

she was silently undressing
the vulgar forever
making light of reality
she confuses the comfort
of need and addiction

2 packs a day
and the heat
of your breath
coils around
the heart
of the subject
you're going
and nothing
should change that
and yet
I can't tear my eyes
from your decline
into madness
stripping our names
from all possible futures

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-09-19 09:52 AM

Powerful...riveting...sensational!
TD

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-09-19 09:59 AM

~K~
About as well said as one could say it.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-09-19 10:03 AM

This is impressive!
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-09-19 10:11 AM

You look exotic and mysterious in your pic! Seeing a photo of you was an unexpected delight!

Wow! To your poem! Packs a punch! A very good write!

Hugs to you, Dear K!
EA

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-19 12:01 PM

I agree, this is powerful and packs a punch- most painful.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2004-09-19 02:03 PM

You wrote the decline so well, ~K~
Could feel your words aching and sense the cost of your pain.

A belated welcome to Passions, it's nice to read you here.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2004-09-20 06:32 PM

This needs bumped to the top as well.

Very nicely done!...Great read

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2004-09-20 06:50 PM

~K~,
I'll be looking forward to more greats like this! You showed reality for what it is.
miscellanea

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

9 posted 2004-09-20 09:19 PM

im having trouble commenting on this one...
leaves me wanting to hug you rather than rave on how great the poem is....it is a great poem though,
just hurts
so i give you that hug anyway

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

10 posted 2004-09-20 09:26 PM

that was... sad.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2004-09-20 11:08 PM

K, the title begged for a read.
Though sad, the write was outstanding.
And that picture is fantastic!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2004-09-21 09:32 PM

sad but good
thanks for sharing

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

13 posted 2004-09-21 09:58 PM

Sensual in the words but the experience doesn't sound the same.

Lightly touched subject leaving the reader to understand what was touched.

dave

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