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ShiningWindHaze
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0 posted 2004-09-18 09:03 PM



My gauge is endless love eternal kisses hug the lips in touch with soulful doves can bring the flames that burn us into bliss we forget the pain stops raining through the day and we find love pets our bodies come together into one mind, soul, and divine wine we taste from the nectar of our tongues when we lick our sickness well not in hell not in heaven times seven would be nice feeling wings sprouting flight of seas turn to galaxies of passion
sky love
action grip our maximum attraction sip the liquid love listen tug our depths to feel us closer and we're one

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1 posted 2004-09-18 09:14 PM


wild write haze
cool style
~W

Susan
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2 posted 2004-09-18 09:42 PM


I felt as if I were on a ride- being carried along by your words.  Enjoyed -

Susan

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3 posted 2004-09-18 09:50 PM


Yes Haze...you certainly write a style that
is no one but you...a rollercoaster ride,
but once a person looks at the words and
finds where each statement is separated,
cool...

ShiningWindHaze
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4 posted 2004-09-19 12:41 PM


Thanks all. I truly feel in some way we were destined to this place. Call me crazy, but I feel I've always known you. Your words remind me of myself in this exact time a long time ago. Friends. I call you. Have you ever longed to be more than yourself? That's me all the time.

- Haze

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