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water deep blue |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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she dreams again on sweet star beams of a prince invisible or so it seems snowy mountain path meetings chance appears in seconds fleeting missed me by a minute whispering within it a little note from my soul come even closer then before kiss me like you want to , yes your a beautiful girl leave me wanting more , so very much more follow me to the shore bare feet in the sand and water deep blue a silver hue noticed your eyes like an elevator rise hush of the air around lost in background sound your laugh dances along playing a lost song while i lay in the summer sun letting my life come undone open and free like the wind and the sea wishes to be will be ...... will be JDW III 9-18-04 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a way of inspiring chills, even within the perfect meter of your laughter and your grace...that smirk upon your face... Liked this very much! TD |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
You flow well. That's some def jam poetry stuff. heh. - Haze |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lol td , the chills dang i think i like that thanks for reading it ... yeah haze i feel it flowin at times gotts to let it go free ~w howls |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Makes me long for the beach and the caress of a lover - enjoyed.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
mmmmmm yes thanks susan ~w |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh, was that you? Dang, I'm going back! Love the flow of this...you are open and free like the wind and the sea. K |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lol thanks k, much appreciated ~the w |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James, this is like chocolate, delicious and bittersweet. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your laugh dances along playing a lost song while i lay in the summer sun letting my life come undone open and free like the wind and the sea wishes to be will be ...... will be'''' ~~ ahhhh the stir of echoes...how well you placed the dance....beautiful! I don’t want the world to see me |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
little ..... lol i am all sweet : o i promise ...hugs ... greensy , i would love to dance but a hug first ~j |
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