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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-09-18 03:20 PM



"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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froggy
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1 posted 2004-09-18 03:52 PM


Hey Snow,
  This is another great one.
Your getting the form down pretty good.

:-)

Snow
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2 posted 2004-09-18 03:58 PM


this form allows more characters (words) 20-28 ... so i kinda like this one more. still only 4 lines.

but i'm not done writing chuech-chu yet  :-)

thank you for the great comment.

snow

Susan
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3 posted 2004-09-18 04:10 PM


Lovely-

You inspire me to start looking into other forms for the challenge - I shall have to do some research-

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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4 posted 2004-09-18 04:24 PM


Lovely, Snow.

I'm enjoying your creations.

Please tell me 'bout "chuech-chu"

Maree

Well I see you doing...What I try to do for me....With the words from a poet...
And a voice from a choir...And a melody... nothing else matters
~Ste

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5 posted 2004-09-18 09:28 PM


red mountain blush


BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2004-09-19 02:09 PM


What a fantastic picture to go with tomorrow's laced promises.

Loved how you freeze framed this, Snow~


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7 posted 2004-09-21 11:18 PM


nice


aujussy wolf
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8 posted 2005-12-16 02:56 AM


that pic with the poem are sweet
((hugs)) wolfy

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9 posted 2005-12-16 04:27 PM


I miss your work, very much.


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10 posted 2007-10-27 05:39 PM


i would like to see more of you



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