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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-18 10:02 AM



Heart Of Glass


you left your impression
finger prints on glass
a constant reminder
how fragile I really am


just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-09-18 10:04 AM


1slick_lady
I like it, I like it.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-09-18 10:56 AM


Nicely done metaphor
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3 posted 2004-09-18 12:07 PM


It doesn't take much to remind us that our hearts are made of glass... Hope they don't press too hard when they leave their fingerprints behind...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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4 posted 2004-09-18 12:38 PM


but then, some impressions on the heart do not would but rather heal and grow

an that's wonderful to know


like your poem a lot!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Ericc
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5 posted 2004-09-18 02:07 PM


Wow Helen....!!!!!

Eric

Krawdad
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6 posted 2004-09-18 02:16 PM


And here I'm so clumsy . . . crash!
Dang!

Goodknight
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7 posted 2004-09-19 07:28 PM


this is great - what a wonderful way to say it - thanks I will remember this metaphor for a long time - paul
SmartChick
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8 posted 2004-09-19 10:08 PM


The title caught my eye. You said just what I feel.
ctowen
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9 posted 2004-09-19 11:24 PM


A prism waiting for someone to free its soul ....

            ... enlightening as always!

                              

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2004-09-20 08:00 AM


fragile is so seductive
when offered as a gift
to the eyes of a lover

enjoyed this ms slick

Robert Frazier
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11 posted 2004-09-20 05:39 PM


. . . finger prints are fragile
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