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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2004-09-17 11:22 AM



Amish

It is an arK upon the sea
That’s driven by internal will
It is a ship that sails the field
Upon the crest of rolling hill

Aromas are of earthy stench
Of hoof and hide, of farmyard scent
But he who tills a fertile trench
Prepares the soul for its ascent

For planting is a Godly task
And course is on a seaward trail
No soul alive would dare to ask
How burdensome this vessel’s sail

A shirt is drenched in timely chore
A hat-rimmed brow in dreadful sweats
And night brings forth another shore
And day another day begets

Elizabeth Santos

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-09-17 11:38 AM


Hiya Lady!!! How R U?  

So good to see you...I believe this should be printed and shown to them...they would be honored....
Love to go to Lancaster
This is a treasure from a tender poetess...missed reading you...

more, more, more...smiles and hugs

Martie
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2 posted 2004-09-17 11:39 AM


Liz

Perfect!!  

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3 posted 2004-09-17 12:34 PM


This is beautiful....sometimes I'd like to live their life, if only for a day. Wonderful work Liz!

~sky

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Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

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4 posted 2004-09-17 01:43 PM


This was taken riding down a road by Liz's hometown in PA in 2003.  I had never seen the Amish before and couldn't believe what hard-working and wonderful people they were, or that they could afford those fancy "Clydesdale" horses.

             

Look Liz, I see a great big Clydesdale!
A farmer in black guiding it on its course.
Silly Canadian, that’s not a Clydesdale,
Just an ordinary, American Amish workhorse!

Remember?

I sure do.  Some of the fondest memories I have are of Pennsylvania and its beautiful landscape.  However...one town there has a name that is pretty darn funny I tell you.  Look it up - Intercourse, PA is actually on the map!

Oh Lizie, this was such a lovely tribute to those wonderful people there.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-09-17 02:13 PM


Elizabeth,
"And day another day begets."


Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
6 posted 2004-09-17 07:07 PM


THank you all for your comments, Oh, Sharon, I still have to laugh at your remark about the Clydesdales, And yes I remember well our ride througjh Amish country. Very fond memories!
Come again!
Love to all,
Liz

Nan
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7 posted 2004-09-17 09:12 PM


One of the loveliest Amish towns in Pennsylvania... True fact... We saw them...

This is a wonderful poem, Lizzie.  You've captured the heart of these folks beautifully...


Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2004-09-17 09:35 PM


Awwww,  Denise, Martie, Liz, and Nan in Intercourse, Pa. Many wonderful memories from this picture. THanks Nan for posting this.
Liz

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