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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-16 08:47 PM


Sweet Words


Like a luscious flower garden
she pleases me, an emporium of
beauty, cascading before my eyes.
And her voice is as lovely as a
cello, soft and crystal clear,
saying the sweet words to me
that I long to hear, providing
pleasure to my heart and soul
and music to my ears.


JamesLee
September15
2004

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-09-16 09:22 PM


James...

oh, yes, this....
a song...

Yes!

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-09-16 09:23 PM


A very sweeeet song it is James!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Laoha
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3 posted 2004-09-16 09:40 PM


"....I breathe the fragrance myself, and know it and like it,...."
                 -Whitman

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Poetic Moments


Suetang
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4 posted 2004-09-16 09:55 PM


I can see you haven't lost your romantic touch, James.  This was beautiful.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

marcel
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5 posted 2004-09-16 11:32 PM


I yearn for that beautiful word.....nice writing.

KMM

Susan
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6 posted 2004-09-17 12:29 PM


Mmmmm, sweet read

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

MGROVES
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7 posted 2004-09-22 07:20 AM


can always count on you for a little romance . thanks


Pilgrimage
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8 posted 2004-09-22 03:19 PM


What a pretty vision. You have a gift for these, you know.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

DavePage
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9 posted 2004-09-22 04:15 PM


Images of a word
Word of a dream
Image of a feeling
To
Find

Dave

MGROVES
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10 posted 2004-09-23 09:05 AM


a romantic at heart always
nice one


LeeJ
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11 posted 2004-09-23 09:12 AM


beautifully written and expressed
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