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E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

0 posted 2004-09-16 05:58 PM

a little something in the rythm of Poe, I hope

Hear the wind?
Gentle wind.
How it whispers it's intend,
As it flows across a rose,
Bringing sweetness to ones nose.
As it slows,
And it grows,
Ever gently does it wend.
With a melody to lend.
Flowers dancing as they bend.
How it blows,
Leafy shows,
Spreading colors as it goes.
Oh the wonders it bestows.

Hear the breeze?
Stiff breeze.
How it loves to gust and tease,
As it frolics free and gay,
Singing tunes in wild array.
Trees asway,
Kites display,
As it courses at it's please.
Tossing all caught in it's seize.
Bending grass across the leas.
How it flees,
With such ease.
Whipping foam from bluest seas.
Taking joy in it's appease.

Hear the gale?
Angry gale.
How it's danger does fortell,
As it bellows out it's might,
In the dark of moonless night.
Raging spite,
It's incite.
Heaving forth with fierce impel.
Screaming out of tune, it's tale.
Leaving wreckage in it's trail.
Giving fright,
It's delight.
Surging on in frenzied flight,
'Til it ends in whisper slight.

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-09-16 06:01 PM

Ooooh, a subject dear to my heart and one of my favorite sensations, the kiss of the wind. You described the wind's moods oh so well. Much enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-09-16 09:24 PM

ES, I enjoyed this very much. In following your critique message, watch your contractions....

and that's the only little bit of critique I have to give...

It was a very good read!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-16 09:27 PM

Excellent read Eric..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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