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Jangle of pipes
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Jangle of pipes |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Jangling rhymths echo something moving yes heaven On the roof and the hoof and the lights Steam rising vapour tributes around the floor I am going out dancing Yellow coat on Men at the door know of a hot dog going Got my coat on Yellow Tricks on the far bar Feet on the floor Coat to the DJs Going dancing For an early bird Flying dancing swirling twisting Yes dave |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
sounds like fun, haven't danced in years... well done.....E S West "always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.." |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I never do it locally Cirencester is the base, so I dance in Manchester, Halifax when there, else it is the talk of the local supermaket. regards Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Flying dancing swirling twisting Yes Me too! This is what I like to do  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I know this is going to sound amiss, and yet, what came to mind while reading this was fly fishing...now before you laugh, have you ever watched the art? The line dancing in the air, back and forth...to a rhythum of breeze music, the whipping sound...twisting, and then, plop, the faint sound of the lure hitting water? Wonderful write, even though your intent was not what I've described here, you have certainly inspired me... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Susan You decadent Susan Thanks dave LeeJ Lee who am I to complain. Dave |
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