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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-16 12:21 PM


Rustling touched a bent blade of an idea whistling over ground to caress wildness and vision

Sky fast flowing black blue moving wind of a picture in dark night's dream

Friendship light bantering determined words of use

Nights of talk never repeated never majicked but there for a moment

Lies, use, sensual dreams destroyed by dreams

Movement flowing forgotten unknowing challenge to harden desire

An evening of wishing that was never there to an evening of planning that was there to a day that forgot

A world of time that took minutes to decorate years for their own seconds

Of Majick Midnight


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miscellanea
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OH
1 posted 2004-09-16 01:47 PM


Dave,
  The thing I like best about your writing is that it is indefinitive. It sends me imagery, but leaves enough space for me to interpret it in several different ways.

Majick Midnight...  at first I looked up the word majick in the dictionary thinking it might be an English colloquialism then realized your intention!  You are a clever one.
               miscellanea


LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-09-16 01:54 PM


and people tell me I'm deep???

This was truly awesome!!!

A wicca spell?


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-09-16 02:00 PM


Most enjoyable read Dave.

Expertly penned.

Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-09-16 03:57 PM


miscellanea

I love it that you read it, that you liked it.

Dave


LeeJ

and people tell me I'm deep???

This was truly awesome!!!

A wicca spell?

Magic tells you, majick would never dream of telling you.

dave


Enchantress

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Most enjoyable read Dave.

Expertly penned.

Hugs~
~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Thanks for your words.

Smiles but it is not of Autumn it is of endeavour, drive, thoughts, relationships, love in certain aspects as relationships have a degree of love and feeling.

Dave




The freedom of vision is my vison of Majick

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