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sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2004-09-16 10:29 AM

Beautifully written into the book of life
I find myself entranced by your stare
I never realized what it'd be like
If I hadn't noticed you there

From the other side of a crowded room
You said nothing, yet my eyes heard every word
The beauty you possess that surrounded you
Made everyone else disappear

As we met in the middle of that room
No words were needed to say
You said it all with that smile of yours
I knew you were mine that day

As we danced through the motion of time
Enjoying each others embrace
I came to realize the edge of heaven
Caressed my soul with grace

Through the years my life has been blessed
Truly of wonderful things
None as beautiful as your creation
For you're the future in my dreams

sim0riah

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-16 10:40 AM

well written caressing the heart of the reader...beautiful

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-09-16 10:58 AM

sim0riah
Excellent write, enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-16 11:16 AM

As soft and gentle as a caress...
very much enjoyed this piece as I do all of yours.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2004-09-16 12:19 PM

*sigh* softly romantic and beautifully said...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-16 05:55 PM

I add to the sighs - lovely

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-09-16 07:11 PM

cool write
that first glance must have really been something

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

7 posted 2004-09-18 01:17 PM

Sometimes the answers in life are all written in our dreams... Thanks for sharing this...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-09-18 05:54 PM

Richard, the world can never have enough romantics...it's nice to see men step up to the plate, and deliver a feast.

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