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Susan
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0 posted 2004-09-16 12:48 PM


Autumn comes soon
its kiss is upon the air
and the Cotton woods sigh
“It’s that time of year”

the Wisteria would dally
but knows it's time to sleep
as Summer seems to linger no longer
and the skies begin to weep

Mother Earth bows in submission
to the coming change of the year
summoning all of her children
soon they must cloak in Winter’s wear

so they begin to shed summer
adorned in the transition of fall
an expanse of transformation
in answer to Mother’s call

would that Summer could be fettered
in chains of delay
and Autumn could be anticipated
as a guest upon different day

but Mother knows best
and there’s no turning back the clock
so I’ll put on the kettle
and welcome the Autumnal Equinox

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2004-09-16 06:21 AM


i could plant myself in summer for ever, but then
i'd miss the colorful fall, so yes, somehow, mother does know best, doesn't she

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-09-16 07:51 AM


beautiful...

You know, autumn always made me kinda sad...depresssed, meaning we were facing a long cold winter of blistery rain, wind, ice and snow...but now, somehow, it doesn't seem as cold anymore...and instead of hating it, I'm starting to enjoy winter, keeping summer deeply imbedded in my heart...
whewwww, spent a lot of years watching the leaves drop in saddness...now, it brings great anticipation and wonder...
SMiles and hugs, this brought me to a lovely place.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2004-09-16 07:58 AM


kewl ms

autumn is the appitizer before winter spreads the feast...especially in your part of the country...

vandana
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4 posted 2004-09-16 10:21 AM


enjoyed
Susan
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5 posted 2004-09-16 10:25 AM


Good morning all- I am ready now for an Indian Summer - rain rain go away, dearest sun come back and play -

Thanks you for your kind replies --

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-09-16 11:29 AM


Very nicely said Susan..
But, as much as I love summer...
I'm ready for autmun and the colours...
and then winter and the crisp fresh air and snow!
Lovely this..lovely you.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2004-09-16 11:44 AM


I favor the Fall, and this poem fits well into my present frame of mind.
Startime55
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8 posted 2004-09-16 11:49 AM


BRAVO!!! I too love summer but the return of Autumn brings joy with it also...each season has its own magic...you capture the welcome of autumn very well...A joy to read...

Susan
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9 posted 2004-09-16 01:08 PM


Yes, Autumn is most beautiful and truly is one of my favorite seasons.  Unfortunately it is followed by winter, which is great for December, but January and February into March just drag -- brrrr!  Would that it could only be a month or two of snow, rather than 4 to 5.

Thanks for your kind replies - and hugs to you, my friends-

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

E S West
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10 posted 2004-09-16 05:32 PM


beautifully said.... enjoyed much...E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Kevo
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11 posted 2004-09-18 03:38 AM


Wow, what a slice of heaven you created.  Yes, I noticed the leaves beginning to change a bit.  It conjurs a bit of reminiscence about wood fires, potbelly stoves, multi-colored leaves, shorter days, chilly nights, cuddling under the covers in the warmth of my wife.  A few thunderstorms roaring overhead.  A bit more rain.  I could keep going.

You know it is beginning to feel a bit like the summer's coming to a head.  Which reminds me to practice with the bow.  Fall means my favorite season...hunting season.  Yipeeeee!

Big K

Susan
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12 posted 2004-09-18 01:07 PM


Thanks muchly E.S.

Kevo- the bow - ah what fun what fun!  This October we will be having "the feast of Robin Hood" and will have lots of bow activity.  Not to mention a roast and games and  a bon fire.  Ah, looking forward to that

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ShiningWindHaze
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13 posted 2004-09-19 03:11 AM


one step beyond..

- Haze

Susan
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14 posted 2004-09-19 11:31 AM


Thank you Haze -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2004-09-19 11:52 AM


How well you set the table here...
Susan, another wonderful write. Enjoyed.
TD

BluesSerenade
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16 posted 2004-09-19 03:00 PM


would that Summer could be fettered
in chains of delay
and Autumn could be anticipated
as a guest upon different day

Then again,  any time is the right time for tea.

You make me smile, Susan~

Susan
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17 posted 2004-09-19 03:53 PM


Ah, TD and Bluesey- please sit with me, I'll pour you each a cup and we can enjoy some fall conversation

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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