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SouthernWinds Junior Member
since 2002-08-23
Posts 12Dreaming in the clouds |
A muse endangered silence mingling as heart and soul desire tingling A misting of music dancing with light forming cascading illusions of fright A silhouette alone mimics of love dressed to kill missing a glove A whispered melody once enchanted memories of him forever implanted. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, Southern, you've been a member for some while. I'm glad to see that you've finally posted, so I could be one of the first to say, Welcome to Passions! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome, Southern Winds.  'A silhouette alone mimics of love dressed to kill missing a glove' I enjoyed this in particular. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS SW! Enjoyed your first post. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. A good strong first post. Enjoyed. ThisDiamond |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice start to posting, welcome to Passions! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful first post with us. Welcome to Passions! Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SW, Please don't wait two more years to post again. This was good. It is amazing how much brain teasing can happen in such short lines. A lot of food for thought here. Congratulations!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
wELCOME  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions! We are glad you have joined us.....Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Kindly~ Lauren~ I don’t want the world to see me |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I'm glad that you've finally posted!  Great poem, I can't wait to read more from you! Welcome to Passions!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well it's about time! lol I see that you have been a member for over 2 years ~ and this is your FIRST post! Why have you been holding out on us! This was a very nice poetic offering that you have given us! ~ and you are not "Alone" anymore!  Warm hugs and a smile, Earth Angel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoy your read |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Enjoyed the read, Southern Winds... Looking forward to more poetry from you.Welcome to Passions... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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SouthernWinds Junior Member
since 2002-08-23
Posts 12Dreaming in the clouds |
My thanks to all of you for your warmest of welcomes. When I joined two years ago I didn't have enough confidence to post anything. After visiting and reading here for a while I realized I should join in and see what happens, so here I am. I look forward to sharing more here with all of you and I look forward to reading all the fabulous poetry You all have to offer. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
dressed to kill missing a glove LOVE that line! Nice meter and flow to your words; I enjoyed this much and look forward to reading more of your work |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to Passions! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
welcome to pip this was really nice  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes welcome enjoyed this one |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you finally posted! |
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