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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-15 08:13 PM



fear and anger
roll into one
their intensity
tearing
me a-part

don't need a hurricane here
the winds of words
can bring on the damage
though in a heart and mind
and the rains can pour
through eyes
that can't make out
tomorrow~~

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2004-09-15 08:21 PM


I know just how you feel.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-09-15 08:22 PM


yep, heart-hurricanes are the worst

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2004-09-15 09:24 PM


I've been trying to have a better attitude out of simple fear of CREATING hurricanes.

This reminded me of one...

*heart hugs* dear lady.

E S West
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since 2004-08-31
Posts 116
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4 posted 2004-09-16 05:40 PM


sighing...sad words expressed so well

                E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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5 posted 2004-09-16 07:44 PM


Sometimes a will help ease the strain of a dismal day..Nice write..

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

MyHeartofShadows
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since 2004-09-04
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Hyattsville, MD
6 posted 2004-09-16 07:55 PM


It is sometimes hard to see tomorrow, even more so when through a raining of tears.  I know the feeling, but like most storms it will pass and then you need to hold on to those who are left.  Good luck weathering
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