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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-15 07:13 PM


Peppered Beef Jerky


I could love you for
a million years if
you would share your
love with me.
But I wouldn't waste
a day of my love,
I'd take my love
away my love,
if you wouldn't
give your love
to me.

If you don't love
me say so.

Let me go.
Let me go.


JamesLee
September15
2004
These are some
of her favorite
things.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
MGROVES
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1 posted 2004-09-15 07:51 PM


nice


Copperbell
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2 posted 2004-09-15 08:24 PM


mixed emotions on this one...
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-09-16 08:18 PM


Thank you MGROVES and copperbell for the nice responses....James
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