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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-09-15 04:52 PM



Chaliced Recall
~*Marge Tindal*~

So very whispery you came
touching my tender
In chaliced sips
of fond remember~

Once more you came
touched my all
Stayed until teardrops
ceased to fall~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-09-15 05:15 PM


One that will stay that long... is one to keep forever. *S* Lovely! *S*
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2 posted 2004-09-15 05:33 PM


Marge,
A keeper.

Susan
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3 posted 2004-09-15 05:36 PM


Marge - this is exquisite, in verse and art-

  Susan

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4 posted 2004-09-15 05:37 PM


Marge, this touched my heart . Thank you, I needed this today.

You are such a love ... hugs, Marti

Betty
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5 posted 2004-09-15 07:12 PM


This is beautiful.
Betty

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6 posted 2004-09-15 07:15 PM


Silky...James
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7 posted 2004-09-15 07:49 PM


beautiful


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8 posted 2004-09-15 07:55 PM


This poem was amazing...very much enjoyed!

~Alli~

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9 posted 2004-09-15 10:03 PM


Dear Marge:

Another outstanding write!  I look forward to all of your work.

Love
Betty Lou

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10 posted 2004-09-15 10:11 PM


Marge, this is now one of my favorites.
It's a wonderfully positive cupfull.
Keeper.

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11 posted 2004-09-16 02:00 PM


I haven't been around much Marge. Beautiful pen and display as usual. My prayers are with all of you down there...and thanks for your very nice response to my last write here. The Best.

wayne

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then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2004-09-17 08:35 AM



Thank you all for liking this little penning~

Sometimes the moments are so special that they just squeeze the heart with remembering~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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