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mrmojorisin5908
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0 posted 2004-09-15 03:52 PM



Back to endless sorrow
For tomorrow will be the same
A cruel and unforgiving game
I wish I could go home
In a sober state wishing to wash away
Tears roll down the pale green face
Wanting to be with you forever
One day it will come true, but not to you
Always more, haven’t I done enough?
Not for you, a silent angel in the rain
Your beauty does not surpass fear
Work past it and it will become clear
Vivid as the transparent skies
I’m dreaming of the days we had

Andrew A.
"I am working to make myself a visionary: you won't possibly understand, and I don't know how to explain it to you. To arrive at the unknow

© Copyright 2004 Andrew A. - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-09-15 06:38 PM


mrmojo, a very beautiful poignant write
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-09-15 07:17 PM


Nice writing...James
LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-09-16 09:26 AM


great writing!!!  
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4 posted 2004-09-16 09:47 AM


real nice


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