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Open Poetry #33

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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-15 11:18 AM

Come the words to blow your mind
Comes the magic of vision
Co-existance of fire and emotion
Flame the light to the words
Of Devotion

Acknowledging nothing
I learn to live
Pay the tributes
Bear the scars
To bear an idea home

In a land where no-one needs
In a land where we would die
If we ask to
Find where need is paramount
Within ourselves

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-15 11:23 AM

this was pure brain candy

especially...
Find where need is paramount
Within ourselves

oft to many times, we leave behind a world of which we've never found, and yet, time and again...we ache for something we know not
but feel its so close presence, to an unknown taste, familiar yet distant...though there are few who have met that face

This was a pleasure read

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-15 11:56 AM

Thanks Lee

It was a pure brain hike.

dave

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2004-09-15 12:12 PM

Achingly familiar...I know this place of which you write...

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2004-09-15 12:22 PM

I agree....great brain candy indeed!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-09-15 01:14 PM

Thanks

Dave

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