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Shades of Butterflies
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Shades of Butterflies |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Shades of Butterflies A butterfly had crossed my path I saw it through a due drop lie It thawed the sour of my wrath Distorted in a wine soaked sky My thoughts were thunder full of grime Bolting lighting from my core It melted through the mist of time To catch the wind of evermore And I was drawn into its grace Into a field of greenery Transmitted into time and space A fantasy of scenery It’s there I shed a tear of loss That fell into a shallow well In truth within my bed I toss And cried allowed, my Isabel It’s where I go to seek her soul A flower on a phantom shoal |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well done Sey, good morning.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hey sy, good morning You sir are a greenery of poems! This was awesome and happy music Have a great day |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Hope you are safe out of Ivan's way down there. Wonderful morning write m'friend. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You adorn the wings in glimmer gold... and sing the tales of days of old...  You know I love it when you do this...  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 Sy~ Your words are so enchanting....loved it!Love and hugs ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nice sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sigh.... Loved it Sy!!! Very nice!!! Good Morning To You!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* I am sure these words will fly to where her soul can capture them...A stunningly beautiful poem...your words ring with the music of the minstrels of old... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy It's not always easy when you see butterflies.  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
too lovely, ethereal even I do think you meant "dew" instead of "due" but if you meant "due" help me understand the subtle intent that I have missed. I especially love the 2nd to last stanza of your sonnet. (It is a sonnet, right?) Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Thank you dear. LeeJ And you are a greenery of replies.  Nancy, Big hugs back. Sunshine I do know you are dear to me. Romantic, Love and hugs back. sim0riah Thank you for the nice. Justbleu Good morning Bridgette and thank you. Startime55 You are very sweet, thank you. Martie I know, I know. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May you forever "catch the wind of evermore" and be drawn into the fantazzmagorical grace of a "field of greenery". ~ and may God grant you unlimited time and space for your travels. Sending you a rainbow of every shade of butterfly, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS No I meant entitlement or privilage lie. And I am happy with your reply. Yes it is a sonnet. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I learn so much from you each day Sy, and today was no different in starting me off on a positive note. This reminded me of my granddaughters' favorite Christian story I read them as we love butterflies too. It is called, "Butterfly Story, A Spiritual Journey",by Dr. Jeff Sandoz, Copyright 1997. This is our favorite part of that story, quote: Here is a link should you ever find time to enjoy this story, and the main site is our favorite hangout http://butterflywebsite.com/articles/story.htm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I am privileged with your gift. I pray I may do the same for you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are just a library of information and good cheer. LOL if I were morman I would make you one of my wives. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If you loved me you could always convert you know?  Hey, get her off of me!  Isabel ... I was just kidding. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops! I just noticed that I had written "limited" in my reply! I have now duly changed that to "unlimited"! Fly with the butterflies ~ and the angels!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are a true butterfly and with a fabulous sense of humor Earth Angel, I knew what you meant.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
As delicate and graceful as the butterfly you saw. Beautiful Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio I thank you so much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweet. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good as always always a pleasure reading your words |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Always a pleasure to read your replies. |
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