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Why don't you?
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Why don't you? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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So why don’t you close your eyes, release the air polluted with fear, and float like a wind borne feather back, further back, as far as you can into the depths of time? Why don’t you roll as if you’re a wave over the rocks and pebbles of woe onto the shore still there as before when last you recalled happier times? Why don’t you as if you’re a flame burst from the snapping and cracking of wood into the freedom of passionate dreams where you lay bare the wonder of you? Why don’t you choose to listen awhile to the sound of your heart beating no lies and feel at your core the emotion of soul force energy upward into your brain? If you try and believe you’re over the line open your eyes and picture me there not embracing but touching first on your face then trailing the feel of me down to your feet. And just when you think you’re ready for more see me step back and merge into the shadows as if I have left and not honoured a pledge or reneged on a promise made long ago. But there I will be always looking at you until you believe and truly can know love has a way of making things be! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
And just when you think you’re ready for more see me step back and merge into the shadows as if I have left and not honoured a pledge or reneged on a promise made long ago. Wow. You gotta love someone when they empower you and then take a step back! Neat write. miscellanea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are absolutely write..love prevails never dies, but grows thing we might deep quit impossible...smiles and hugs, very much enjoyed |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Made me really think Dave |
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