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Susan
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0 posted 2004-09-14 08:30 PM



touch me soft . . .

a whisper wind
across heated skin

the merest hint
of a kiss

tremble sensations

rippling

as dew drop formations glisten

and my breath is stilled
a moment in bliss--

yes . . .

touch me soft


s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-09-14 08:36 PM


How delicately exquisite.
Simply beautiful Susan...softly sensual.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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2 posted 2004-09-14 09:05 PM


Really good

dave

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3 posted 2004-09-14 09:06 PM


tender, sensual, soft....just the way I like them!  beautiful.
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4 posted 2004-09-14 09:36 PM


Oh, Susan .... this is so romantic and sensually soft.

Loved it so much .... huggles, Marti

Susan
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5 posted 2004-09-14 09:54 PM


Thank you all for your kind words and warm hearts -  

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-09-15 12:09 PM


Nice...James
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7 posted 2004-09-15 01:20 AM


A lovely invitation Susan. Romance, one of my favorite topics and events.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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8 posted 2004-09-15 01:26 AM


beautiful, quiet, and greatly enjoyed thank you for sharing ^_^

and then He created the horse...

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-09-15 04:49 AM


you do have the poetic touch
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10 posted 2004-09-15 07:34 AM


peaceful longing
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2004-09-15 09:19 AM


romantica
with gloves

or an ad for downy perhaps?

Susan
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12 posted 2004-09-15 10:19 AM


I do appreciate your warm comments and the encouragement they give to me - thank you.

Dark - downy soft, yeppers, that's it

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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13 posted 2004-09-15 11:34 AM


Smiling at you for this silky write...
sim0riah
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14 posted 2004-09-15 11:38 AM


Very Nice Susan

sim0riah

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Sim0riah

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15 posted 2004-09-15 12:10 PM


Sensually beautiful...

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16 posted 2004-09-15 06:10 PM


Susan~
Your words indeed ... touch us soft~
*sighs*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Susan
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17 posted 2004-09-15 07:22 PM


Smiling back and giving warm hugs -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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18 posted 2004-09-16 10:15 PM


Susan,
   This trickles along as pretty as any poem could.
                miscellanea

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