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Wash Day?
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Wash Day? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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One scoop or two; you choose the strength to brighten the whites of clouds passing by above human life and way beyond caring what lies on the ground. For stains I suggest a smooth additive commonly found in a bottle or two to take you up there way beyond caring. Grease is a problem; how slimy the feel streaked on pure silk by mechanical actions equipped to propel life travelers somewhere up there way beyond caring. Rub-a-dub-dub, I guess there’s no love to twist, turn, and bend, unfolded maps to that place up there way beyond caring. But if I hang out, step out, or put out, wind like a chariot tries to graciously lift and carry me there way beyond caring. And after I’ve brought in, folded and smoothed, I’ll soon be asking again, one scoop or two, one bottle or two, to lift me up there, somewhere up there, way beyond caring what lies on the ground! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Hopefully written in fun Dave |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dave - most decidedly written in "fun" although perhaps not my choice of word. Thanks for the read. |
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mrmojorisin5908 Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 103Colorado |
Nice. It was a fun piece to read Andrew A. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
cute |
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