I just fancy a ro - what is that word

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Open Poetry #33

I just fancy a ro - what is that word

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-14 03:27 PM

Draft of something I need to return to.

Posted for just a medley of ideas.

I hope it is of interest but it is disjoined, not put together well, but I think it might be of interest.

Windows washed on a sunday morning
Rain spitting onto panes
Glued to the window watching
A face washed by rain
Under a tree

Captivity in a large cage
Forced by drains to be upward
Hot water shared between the house
Dont ever take your share of it
Below ground

Romantic on a hill
Sings of vision
To someone deaf
By the city
And we take that decision

To understand
That those who shout loudest
Do it from the areas
That allow them
To ignore the Iron Law of Economics

Where those who should breed
Are there to be herded
Those to control
To be birthed at need
For life

Dave

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

1 posted 2004-09-14 03:53 PM

got me thinking, especially the last verse

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-14 04:07 PM

Thanks Copperbell

I dream I am supposed to produce copper bottom prose but the reality is, I wouldn't know how and I dont have the time.

Dave

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