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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-09-14 02:31 PM



On the ground of our
unknowing...

Our steps fall sure in
tender faith.

Unafraid to reach the edge.

Where new beliefs may
wait...

And only the fall is
certain.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-09-14 02:33 PM


Yes, please, and thank, you...
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-14 02:39 PM


Into knowledge

dave

jellybeans
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3 posted 2004-09-14 02:42 PM


brevity accentuates the faith with each 'step' is written......wonderfully written
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-09-14 02:44 PM


Exquisite Eric..absolutely beautiful!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-09-14 02:51 PM


Beautifully said.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2004-09-14 03:24 PM


You say it all with so few words ... and that truly is a gift.
ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2004-09-14 06:11 PM


So very true...
"where only the fall is certain"
A wonderful write Eric.
TD

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