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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-14 07:59 AM


tennis shoe trees
leaf strings
tied in knots
by wind kids hands

talked to god again
he said he could fix em
with some time
maybe a winter or two

lady next door laughed
said she could do it better
with a chainsaw wrench
and a fire place tool

I said god didn't need help
she said all men did
and killed her roses
with a bug be gone gun

and some second hand water
________
Dark



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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-14 08:06 AM


Fabulous write...whatever we encounter, patience, endurance, is finding hope & answers in a barren land...not looking for acceptance in others, but trusting self...this speaks the power of love in affirmation...through a season of self-discovery...well-watered valley of fertile soils...tremendous write and one of my favs of yours...thank you for writing and sharing...Good good morning and happy Tuesday!

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-14-2004 11:36 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-09-14 08:26 AM


Dark,
Enjoyed the write.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-09-14 09:13 AM


Sounds like a crochety old woman
who has given up on the world
because she lives on a street
with teenaged boys...

well done, Sir...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-09-14 09:32 AM


I said god didn't need help
she said all men did

well now, I just have to say I love these lines the most.  good morning.

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-09-14 10:02 AM


This is great D- put a smile on my face, as often happen   You know I do love your word weaving, spell casting talent.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-09-14 12:48 PM


you know I'll never stop reading
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