Allways knewed I make it out of

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Open Poetry #33

Allways knewed I make it out of

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-13 07:11 PM

Throbbing towels hitting the words
Sounds like a macho
But no different from a woman

Bills get paid
No matter how you aquire
Someone
You dont say no to

Body thinks
Mind remembers
Words
days

Torn with other passouts
That had no need of us

But You Know
The magic on a dark night
The words they have no delight in a woman
Just moving imgages
Understanding images
And a belief
And a demand

That you can like a woman as a friend
And like a man as a friend

Because both of them have the magic

Dave

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-09-13 08:38 PM

Dave,
I knewed I like this from the title on.

But You Know
The magic on a dark night
The words they have no delight in a woman
Just moving imgages
Understanding images
And a belief
And a demand

That you can like a woman as a friend
And like a man as a friend

Because both of them have the magic

miscellanea

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2004-09-14 01:55 AM

Hey Dave,
Love it my friend.

:-)

Going into folder.

:-)

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-14 11:34 AM

Thanks

I come back and look at my stuff and the fingers have written something I know is me but I do wonder whether I should just let the fingers go wild at times since what is written is my imagination bypassing the intelligent bit of the brain to tell the fingers to type.

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-09-14 10:07 PM

That you can like a woman as a friend
And like a man as a friend

Because both of them have the magic

I really like this

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-09-15 10:47 AM

Thanks Susan

It has to be one of my most distored poems.

dave

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