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Margot
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0 posted 2004-09-13 03:47 AM



Dawn

Dawn
Reaches out to me
Splashed in beauty
Of creation

I touch her
Drink in her glorious color
Revel in the fresh dew
Breathing in the day

Margot Hill
13Sep04

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-09-13 06:24 AM


Again short and concise, but showing more colour and imagination...you are getting there..slowly..but getting there..thank you..


Goldenrose.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-09-13 07:17 AM


Early morning is my very favorite time of day, and so, this washed all the sand out of my eyes...smiles...good one
Margot
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3 posted 2004-09-13 11:17 PM


Goldenrose & LeeJ

Thank you very much

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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