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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-09-12 08:41 PM



I want to escape,
This hell of reality,
Because there is no you,
Here to hold me safe.

So come back to me,
Be the beautiful side of me,
Because when you’re not around,
I feel so ugly inside and out.

I wanna break down.
I wanna cry and cry.
Cry a river of tears,
And drown in my sorrows.

TOO LATE!

Take away this awful ache,
That’s been in my stomach,
Since you left me here alone,
Without you by my side.

Take away the sting,
That’s held behind my eyes,
From holding back the tears,
That will inevitably trickle down.

But most of all,
Take away the sadness,
This pounding heartache,
Of not having you to hold.

TAKE IT!

Just please take it all away….


"I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park

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scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
1 posted 2004-09-12 08:53 PM


May the love of your life return to you..

believe in what your heart feels...

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
2 posted 2004-09-12 10:03 PM


So sad indeed. I know the feeling.

Much love,
Kristabell

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-09-13 01:34 AM


yeah...I relate
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-09-13 07:41 AM


Hey you?  He will be back sooner than you know, until then hold him closely to your heart as I know he will you....
and let it bring you even closer than what you now are.  Hugs and you know where my shoulders are if you need me. You know my shoulders are broad, and will be here to support you.   gal.

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
5 posted 2004-09-13 11:45 AM


Aww Aunt Donna, you're gonna make me cry all over again, I know he'll come back, I just hate the waiting part....Thanks for the replies everyone, they are appreciated.

"I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-09-13 12:27 PM


Staci honey, don't cry. Love you much, and if you get bored you know where we live.  Heart hugs lil
Startime55
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Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2004-09-13 12:50 PM


Your words express powerfully the pain you endure...I too hope you love returns soon and the waiting will end...

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
8 posted 2004-09-13 05:20 PM


Thanks everyone...When he is around...time goes to fast...It's only a couple weeks that he'll be gone, but it feels like forever because he isn't here..

"I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2004-09-13 06:51 PM


Be the beautiful side of me,

~*~

Something tells me you are beautiful
with or without someone holding you...
still, I know this feeling, and
I also know...you're a lucky young person
to love someone this much!

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
10 posted 2004-09-13 08:37 PM


Thank you, I consider myself lucky to love him, and have him love me back, nothing makes me happier.

"I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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