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Just Watch |
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Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
Just Watch Just watch this flower bloom at night Isn't this the perfect sight? A vision much like you and I Just watch this flower bloom and die Just watch the seed melt in the ground Isn't this new life we've found? The air is moist, my heart is dry Just watch this flower bloom and die Just watch me bloom tonight again Feeling better, only when... You promise not to make me cry And watch this flower bloom and die |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Promises, promises! Liked this, Annie~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice Dave |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
No one can ever really promise anything. We don't know what goes on in eachother's heads. It's ignorance when one thinks that others think just like them. Just like you are free to disregard anything I just wrote. I hate it, but it does make things more sweet. - Haze |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very sad. Nice write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicley done Annie! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...but maybe it's just my mood |
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