navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Time ... Precious Time
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic Time ... Precious Time Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2004-09-12 02:51 PM



Time ... Precious Time
~*Marge Tindal*~

Time …
take your time
as I meander through
the things I took for granted
before the storm-in-brew~

The home with roof
over weary, weary head
the gift of love found
in the share of bed~

The bless of GrandieGirl’s arms
wrapped ‘round ~Poet~ tight
as we prayed down the day
making room for the night~

Children grown
with homes of their own
Safe and sound …
as the storm wrapped ‘round~

Fair face of a flower
graced under a tree
that blossomed sheer beauty
for all to see~

Birds in tweet at rise-of-sun
the woods in full-feathered song
as moon kissed the day done~

Laughter in peals
‘cross neighborhood fences
the bright rainbow sheen
as the rain rinses
pixie dust off the meadow
making way
for a new tomorrow
to replace this day~

Time …
take your time
for I’ve much yet to pray-say
thanking Him for the blessings
I received yesterday~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2004 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
1 posted 2004-09-12 02:59 PM


Dear Marge:

How this touches my heart and brings tears to my eyes. Wonderful expressions of your faith and strength. You are a dear friend and I am so proud of the way you meet adversity!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-09-12 03:00 PM


So glad all are safe, Marge...
hang tough through Ivan.

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-09-12 03:04 PM


Ah, the beauty of gratitude and the depth of faith - these are carried in your words.  

Susan

Now who is Ivan?  Guess I've got to check out the news again.  Silly ostrich keeps her head tucked in the ground and away from the news.  If another comes, safe be your harbor dearest friend.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-09-12 04:05 PM


So sweet and tenderly beautiful!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-09-12 04:14 PM


Marge,
A wonderful write, really enjoyed the read.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2004-09-12 07:01 PM



Yes, we must thank Him for each and every glorious day
Beautiful, Marge
Stay safe
Liz

Betty
Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159
Virginia
7 posted 2004-09-12 09:20 PM


What a wonderful way to express what you've been through.
Love ya,
Betty

Kristabell
Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
8 posted 2004-09-12 09:30 PM


Beautiful!!
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
9 posted 2004-09-12 09:33 PM


Yes..please stay safe through Ivan as well.
The prayers will continue here.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
10 posted 2004-09-12 09:33 PM


Now I can see why Susan lives in Ca.  Marge
dear girl,  I hope all your lovely words and
prayers are received and answered.  You have
those precious Grandbabies...and I am sure
their grandmother is certainly help watch
the nest....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2004-09-13 01:47 AM


very touching...you know you always touch my heart
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

12 posted 2004-09-13 06:49 AM


to find the precious treasures in all that you've been through is priceless...we are all here, treasured by your blessings....to witness and learn from...a grand poem from a very elegant poetess.  Thank you!
Isobel
Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529
Qld, Australia
13 posted 2004-09-13 06:50 AM


Dear Marge

What a lovely poem.  You are so brave, but do me a favour.  If Ivan knocks on your door.....RUN!!!!!!!

Stay safe my friend and I know that you will not let any harm come to those precious grandchildren of yours.

Love Isobel ox


Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
14 posted 2004-09-13 09:24 AM


Dear Marge, you are a beautiful soul! To be  grateful despite such terrible events and to be able to appreciate even more what you have, is so touching.
Beautiful words you have found in the core of your heart.
Love and hugs, also to the girls (from little Simon who is staying with us for a few days with Mommy and Daddy).
Margherita  

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
15 posted 2004-09-13 09:28 AM


~ Poetically expressed words of grace and gratitude.

I am thanking Him as well for keeping you and your loved ones safe in harm's way.

Loving hugs,
EO

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
16 posted 2004-09-13 08:47 PM



Thank you all so very, very much~

I am ever-mindful of the graciousness of His Love in my life ... and pray He knows just how blessed I feel~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
17 posted 2004-09-14 03:14 PM


Stay safe, dear poet sis!  
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
18 posted 2004-09-15 12:53 PM


Yes time is precious...if we keep that in mind perhaps we will use it more carefully...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Time ... Precious Time

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary