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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-09-12 05:38 AM

Her ghost
is stronger than I am
she wrestles my ambition
to the bottom
of the hour glass

I search the future
for a purpose
but yesterday
has locked
my gaze in place

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-09-12 07:50 AM

Reflection...
a powerfully overwhelming moment.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-09-12 09:27 AM

Oh yes,
I can join this echo.
Lovely presentation K.
TD

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-09-12 09:29 AM

~K~
Nicely put, enjoyed.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-09-12 10:33 AM

you know i always enjoy your writing....
it almost always echoes the need deep in me,

this one is no different,
im there, locked,
sometimes, looking away is not what is intended for us....

focus is more important..no matter what direction we are looking in....

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-12 11:50 AM

Well written. Interesting analogy. Enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2004-09-12 04:49 PM

focus is more important..no matter what direction we are looking in....

Yes I echo what muted said.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2004-09-12 05:03 PM

after reading this, i had to go in search of more...

you, are damn good.
snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

8 posted 2004-09-12 06:27 PM

Enjoyed... echoed a lot of what I feel, but I still enjoyed it

and then He created the horse...

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

9 posted 2004-09-12 09:18 PM

Do not let your passed haunt you. No one can change their passed, no matter how much we want too. The only thing we can do is learn from it. I think it is best to focuss on the present and not the passed or the future. Take it one day at a time.

Much love,
Kristabell

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-09-13 01:50 AM

enjoyed this...much of what I feel

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