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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-09-11 05:40 PM



you sing to me
your soft tenor tones
wrapped around words of desire
that linger within my mind
and shimmer through my soul
as your hands stroke my skin
and your breath teases my ear
and I feel the depths of you
bidding me to come
fall within the keep of your passion
to roam the halls of your heart
where honor walks unhindered
and truth burns like flame upon alter
and I kneel in supplication
that such tender devotion
as I see cascading in veils
of shear adoration
shall enfold me always
in the drape of your love

s.a.t.


Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-11 06:08 PM


And if he doesn't read this poem,  take a
copy....paste it smack dab in the middle of
his shaving mirror...  Beautiful work here.
Yes indeedy,   it is~!~

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2004-09-11 06:49 PM


Absolutely gorgeous writing!!

Bravo, Susan~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-09-11 07:33 PM


what a tribute of love
Susan
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4 posted 2004-09-11 07:49 PM


Mmmmm, thank you friends.  Warm hugs to all-

  Susan

btw - hubby no like poetry, ah well, such is life.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

soul drifter
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5 posted 2004-09-11 08:37 PM


Beautiful. So far, everything I've read by you is wonderful, full of passion. Just beautiful.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2004-09-11 10:05 PM


Complete adoration written to perfection.
Wonderful Susan.
TD

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-09-11 10:10 PM


Very very beautiful as always Susan.
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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8 posted 2004-09-12 11:33 AM


Thank you all, my friends, for your warm replies and for taking the time to reply - I do so appreciate it.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Ericc
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9 posted 2004-09-12 04:09 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

ShiningWindHaze
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10 posted 2004-09-12 06:34 PM


I wonder if God will bless me with someone precious like you.

- Haze

Susan
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11 posted 2004-09-12 06:41 PM


Eric - thank you kindly

Haze - I feel for your lonely heart and would that you will have someone dear find you that can heal your ache.  Thank you for your kind reply.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Kristabell
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12 posted 2004-09-12 08:36 PM


Very sweet and very beautiful!!!!
ecrivan
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13 posted 2004-09-12 09:30 PM


romantically appetizing...nice


Earth Angel
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14 posted 2004-09-12 09:36 PM


It appears to me that you both sing the love song very well!


Linda

Susan
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15 posted 2004-09-13 12:58 PM


Thank you my friends - warm hugs to you-

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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