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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-09-11 08:28 AM

Within a Dream

I hung the moon within a dream
With silver streams of glowing gleam
Making phantoms dance to light
Effervescing in the night

Set desires mental setting
Into bonding and a wedding
Sized it to a perfect fit
And smiled upon this mental wit.

It warmed my heart a wistful start
This fantasy of dreamer’s art
And took me to a pageantry
A place of loving ecstacy

And though the words cannot explain
A walk within a dreamer’s lane
For each will reach a different goal
And each will touch a different soul

But all will feel the dove of love
And time will wear a velvet glove

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

1 posted 2004-09-11 08:34 AM

your words just flow so nicely, make them a delight to read.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2004-09-11 09:00 AM

Your words touch us everyday Sy. This write has magic in it.

believe in what your heart feels...

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2004-09-11 09:06 AM

Well there you go ... making me "Sy" again. Just beautiful, Sy. I love your poetry, you know that?

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-09-11 09:43 AM

MyHeartofShadows
That makes me happy.

scorpio,
Each mind has a well of magic.

Kit,
I feel a puppy and my tail won't stop wagging. So happy to see you here.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

5 posted 2004-09-11 10:09 AM

This is so beautifully written! I love it, especially these lines:

"And though the words cannot explain
A walk within a dreamer’s lane
For each will reach a different goal
And each will touch a different soul

But all will feel the dove of love
And time will wear a velvet glove"

Thanks for sharing something so beautiful.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-09-11 10:10 AM

Good morning, dream artisti! The picture you painted of the moon was simply divine.

~ May all your days ~ and nights ~ be of such loving ecstacy.

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-09-11 10:31 AM

Seymour~
Your thoughts are just so very beautiful~
You word-wrap my heart with such beauty~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-09-11 10:43 AM

And though the words cannot explain
A walk within a dreamer’s lane
For each will reach a different goal
And each will touch a different soul

~*~

So, so true, dear Sy...
for there are always two ways
to walk a path; either
together, or separately...

You make my days glow...

Photo, courtesy, PiP

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2004-09-11 10:52 AM

Mon Cherie
You picked a good name, thank you.

Marge
Who could ask for a better hug.

Sunshine
And you make my sun shine.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-09-11 02:02 PM

very hopeful write

I needed it

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2004-09-11 02:38 PM

Yes Sy, it will...and time will wear that
glove...as we go into our tomorrows of
unknowns and uncertainties...Well done, sir.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2004-09-11 02:50 PM

passing,
Glad I could help.

Barry,
Thank you for the well done my friend.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

13 posted 2004-09-11 03:37 PM

What's it like to have a "real" dream..a good dream?....I'm so tired of these almost "LSD" type thinggies I have.....last night I was a school desk again and some little prick was carving his "Bally loves Britney" on my back...geesch!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

14 posted 2004-09-11 03:42 PM

I had a really nice response to this before I read Toe's comment.  He got me laughing and really got me off the track!

Ok.  I'll try again!  I like the way you transport the reader to such nice places and times.  I always hear melody in your poetry.
Again, a pleasure to read.
           miscellanea

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2004-09-11 04:18 PM

Toerag
It's all in the demention you take it to.
You may be only using four.

miscellanea,
A beautiful reply, thank you.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2004-09-11 06:56 PM

For each will reach a different goal
And each will touch a different soul

You can rhyme with the best of them Sy,
but it is the meaning within your message
that tugs at my heart strings.

Lovely Poem, Seymour~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2004-09-11 07:28 PM

BluesSerenade
Lovely for the lovely.

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