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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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belong. exist. creature. i rhyme with you. not to continue but to resemble evolution. carrying your imperfection is perfect, my resolution of time. a triumph for you, my skin is cold rimed by starvation. i'm ready, dozed by the vertical slope of your smile to accept my fate of the weak. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sounds like you are ready...this was cool! I liked the last lines... ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
GLORY HALLELUJAH! Boy am I glad to see you back here -- I have missed your syncopated thinking! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I ditto Ed? Welcome home, pandonov! |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thank you people, but for a long time I could not write. wasn't "unhappy" enough. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an ending |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Add my name to the ditto list. *S* It's great to see you back... you've been greatly missed! *S* |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
nice touches, I sometimes fail to get a title. |
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