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Kazm
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0 posted 2004-09-10 04:12 PM



Turn Around

Turn around, turn around!
Somehow you don't find me
as I wait, invisible to you,
longing to be seen.

Turn around, turn around!
You've gone so far already
and each step carries you
farther farther, far...

Turn around, hear me call!
I can feel you fading,
searching for one who loves,
finding only dreams....

Turn around, turn around!
maybe I'm already yours
and you will never know
you've passed love by.

Turn around, see my tears!
It's not too late for us;
our dreams may be the same,
I may be the one.
For my Lady Of The East, in thankfulness forever that she did turn.

                                                 Kaz

© Copyright 2004 Kaz Murakami - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-10 04:43 PM


Your lady is a lucky one, my friend... for this heart-cry is incredibly beautiful! *S*

You build the tension so perfectly the reader can't help but whisper with you... I'm so glad your words were heard. *S*

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2004-09-10 04:57 PM


So glad she did turn around and opened her eyes~ that Lady of the east...

I could relate to this one as though you were reading my thoughts.

~Love and hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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3 posted 2004-09-10 07:57 PM


Kaz and Pandonov back on the same day....I can die happy!

Good to see you around here, bud.

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Susan
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4 posted 2004-09-10 08:04 PM


Enjoyed-

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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displaced
5 posted 2004-09-11 05:43 AM


precious
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2004-09-14 12:39 PM


So it wasn't a dream after all?
Good for you!

Gotta love those happy endings.

Nicely done, Kazm~

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