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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-09 07:29 PM


Times To Remember

When we first met
it meant everything to me.
Still I wasn't sure if it
meant anything to you.
I've been waiting most of
my life for a woman like you,
so when we met I knew
just what to do.
I knew that my time
of waiting was through.
Looking at you, my eyes
sent a message to my heart,
she is a special one,
she could be the one,
say the right words,
do the right things,
give a good first impression.
And my heart told my eyes,
look  at her, look at her,
isn't she a sight to see.
Yes, you were pleasing to my eyes,
and my heart felt a warm connection,
and it was truly amazing when you
told me you felt a connection too.
And so you called me on the phone
wanting to spend time with me, and
I desire you more each day and
I'll spend lots of time with you.
Times to remember in the hearts of two.

JamesLee
September07
2004

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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-09-09 07:42 PM


Good that eyes meet
Keep up with them

Dave

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-09-09 09:08 PM


your heart shows loud and clear throughout this, very nice james
sim0riah
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3 posted 2004-09-09 09:46 PM


Very Nice Indeed

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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4 posted 2004-09-10 02:05 AM


very nice


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