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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-09-09 04:56 PM



Within and without,
some days, we just need to shout.
Railroad tracks don’t mind.

Sit down on green grass.
It sure feels good on the hind,
not to mention mind.

Tomorrow will come
without any assistance.
Best to let it be.  

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-09-09 05:08 PM


Love it

Yes

Dave

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2004-09-09 05:15 PM


The last one especially-true and well spoken.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

kayjay
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3 posted 2004-09-09 05:23 PM


Senryu wonders
Sprout like Oregon mushrooms
Just as tasty too

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2004-09-09 05:57 PM


Dave, thanks!
Nan, thanking you for your time
Ken, LOL, they are sprouting, heh? So, when shall we see one from you?

littlewing
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5 posted 2004-09-10 03:53 PM


Ha! OMG I laughed out loud when I read this
one Kacy only because My God . . .
it is so true:

Tomorrow will come
without any assistance.
Best to let it be.  

yes, best . . .

E S West
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6 posted 2004-09-10 05:55 PM


  I like this.... E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Tiersdin
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7 posted 2004-09-10 06:53 PM


Midnitesun, Enjoyed these muchly!

*chuckles*

~tier

iliana
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8 posted 2004-09-11 04:29 AM


That is my feeling exactly today.  Enjoyed this, Kacy.   ....jo
passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-09-11 04:35 AM



nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2004-09-11 08:25 AM


Within and without,
some days, we just need to shout.
Railroad tracks don’t mind.

Sit down on green grass.
It sure feels good on the hind,
not to mention mind.

Tomorrow will come
without any assistance.
Best to let it be.  


Loved them all!!

M

icebox
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in the shadows
11 posted 2004-09-11 09:08 AM


"Within and without,
some days, we just need to shout.
Railroad tracks don’t mind."

All good, this is my favorite.

Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-09-11 09:58 AM


Midnitesun
You are too cute for cute.

Mon Cherie
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13 posted 2004-09-11 10:02 AM


This is so cool!!

Love them all, especially...
"Sit down on green grass.
It sure feels good on the hind,
not to mention mind."

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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