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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2004-09-09 02:44 PM


No point in wondering,
Why should I believe it,
I can wish,
I can dream,
I can ponder,
But why bother,
It’s no use,
No use searchin’.

Other people are lucky,
Not me,
People just think I’m not there,
I am invisible to them,
They could care less,
I’m not real to them,

People think they can play,
That it’s a big joke,
And they laugh,
With not a care in the world,
Not even about how you feel
Because you’re not real… to them,

No point in wondering,
Why should I believe it,
I can wish,
I can dream,
I can ponder,
But why bother,
It’s no use,
No use searchin’.

I was always told to believe,
Believe it would happen when it’s least expected,
But can anyone really believe that,
I don’t know if I ever could,

Oh well I may never know,
Just not experience it,
Be the one that sits and watches
Watching the world go forward,
As I stay behind,

No point in wondering,
Why should I believe it,
I can wish,
I can dream,
I can ponder,
But why bother,
It’s no use,
No use searchin’.

No point in wondering,
Why should I believe it,
I can wish,
I can dream,
I can ponder,
But why bother,
It’s no use,
No use searchin’.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2004 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-09-09 05:25 PM


Your words reminded me of a song - I think it was Ricky Nelson

Dreaming
I'm Only Dreaming

The key words I picked from your words were the ones that resonated

dave


Dreaming
Only dreaming
Watching
Till a day comes true
Waiting
Searching
Believing
It will come true
Hoping

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-09-12 12:53 PM


Those that are searching are searching for those that believes...believe it...anything can happen...James
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-09-12 03:49 AM


I often feel that way too
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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4 posted 2004-09-12 04:11 PM


Poignant and powerful.

Eric

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
5 posted 2004-09-12 10:20 PM


Very sad. Very well expressed. This was a nice write! I know how you feel. Keep pondering, though, or you might be left behind. It does not matter what others think because in the end, you and only you, is what matters.

Much love,
Kristabell

klm
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 58
New Orleans, Atlanta
6 posted 2004-09-12 11:37 PM


well stated...

but consider.
sometimes its best to let others or the world go on by. stay put. continue to season your soul. the resultant aromatics will draw the world to you.

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