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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-08 10:20 AM



I watched
the way your eyes
followed her and her and her
making me wonder
if I could move like that
would your eyes remain
on me?
me

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2004-09-08 10:25 AM


(chuckling)

I'm sure my friend... they would for long enough for you to feel them burn....


sim0riah
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2 posted 2004-09-08 10:48 AM


Mine eyes are upon you. your beauty I respond to. Your words I can't deny. It's with you I wish to lye..

I liked it. I know somedays how you must feel..

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-09-08 10:54 AM


hugs M~
LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-09-08 11:07 AM


Reversible Day/Night vision goggles with your picture in it, that should do it...goggles for which you hold the key...hehehehhe

Good one

E S West
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5 posted 2004-09-08 06:13 PM


I am sure many eyes are on you or wish to be so...
         as mine would be.. E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-09-08 07:29 PM


If he doesn't notice you, then he's blind!  But I know exactly what you mean -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2004-09-08 10:59 PM


I remember feeling this way, so well.
vandana
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8 posted 2004-09-09 12:25 PM


enjoyed
Robert Frazier
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9 posted 2004-09-09 12:33 PM


a few thoughts came to mind after the read, but don't know which to write.  Would you settle for...clever?

Hugs,Rf

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2004-09-09 01:53 PM


thank you all...while at the Renaissance Festival I noticed all eyes upon the belly dancers...and I began to wonder


maybe I should take some lessons

M

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