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A Pendulums Time
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A Pendulums Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Pendulums Time I swing on a pendulums time Slowly turning into grime Singing praises in my mind Feeling notes, the Braille of blind Charging into windmills lie Hung upon their arms in sigh Swung within dimensions core Only this and nothing more Perhaps with age will come my peace? I saw it once a living niece Osmotic in its force of flow Drifting into I don’t know I tick each way and tock each cross And see the mirrors drain and loss Yet cannot grace the flowers breath The turn of beauty into death And cannot turn the other cheek The dark of nothing is too bleek |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is a greatness in you who forms such beauty in words...and it struggles to know you...and you know it...singing a soft gentle siren in the atmosphere, come, let us be... Sy, Good Morning...and thank you for a lovely write... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your tick of tock has rocked my stock... and now I must look into the mirror again. I thought that was me that I saw... perhaps it was just my imagination.    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are my teaspoon of sugar every morning.  Sunshine Why your beauty lights my every morning. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done sir..as always a bit of wisdom and of life in your rhyme.. I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, A pleasure to have you read me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy guy!! Much enjoyed this morning's read. Tea's on and I'll pour. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, your tick of time is always a treasure to hear! Well done sir. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My morning has been graced once again by your outstanding verses. hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am seeing you being swung around all over the place! ~ on a pendulum, a windmill, a clock...and then there were the hurricanes! Is there no rest for you, my sonneteering "flower"? You must be out of "breath"! I am gently blowing an angel breeze your way to replace what has been knocked out of you.....)))))))))))))))))))))  Loveya! EA |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nicely done...I am so gracious to be surrounded by such enthusiastic minds sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear, Gentle, Thank you for the well done. Chris, You are a bliss, Earth Angel, You are a blessing. sim0riah, Your reply a delight to read. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I tick each way and tock each cross And see the mirrors drain and loss Yet cannot grace the flowers breath The turn of beauty into death Sy, I've been trying to figure out a reply to this, but am not very poetic and have a hard time thinking about death, but I suppose it is a real thing, not sure, maybe it's cyclic. I think about the flower in its bloom and just marvel, but do I look at the seeds that are planted, seemingly invisible? The seeds are the real marvel, a continuance of what's good. You are quite the gardener, Sy. A pendulum won't change that fact! A tremendous write. miscellanea |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
Thinking about fading away makes each second so much more glowing deep inside my butterflies inside my stomach inside a large world inside an endless galaxy I fade into beauty, love, poems, rhyme, lust, hate, want, need, passion, laziness, sorrow, glee, laughter, sex, dreams, nightmares, flaws, future, pain, and beginnings never ending till I'm gone. so much more I've missed with only words to describe this vastness. - Haze |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
One has to make the most of the ticks and tocs else we become old crocks before our time. Captivating piece Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miscellanea I am honored with your thoughtful answer. It makes the write worth while, thank you. ShiningWind LOL you will eperience some, not all. Enjoyed your reply. time prophet Your right, thank for the read and reply. |
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