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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-09-08 07:11 AM


Time wags its tail, pleased, content
In a sometimes tired sway
Morning watching shadows
Moving down a fresh split road
From what strange arose

Drops of dust offer ready sighs
Cordwood for warm standbys
Choice becomes totem
A gypsy soul, wide gluten numbers

Composed of little...but much
Let’s sit on the tailboard...a while
Trace and settle in sight
Become pink juice of respite

Interlinked arcs, draw shapes of mountains
Handfuls of flared sirens
Lap courses atop, handling heavy rainfalls
With lulling bare-handed ermines
As with efforts of art we
Look on with them….

Matching up images
Touching together, flat palms
Patting it over and over again
We smile and declare perfection

One word message...love
Love which stretches irregular sometimes, yet writes
A Midsummer Night's meaning
Pressing the likeness of form and spirit
Making fine adjustments to the image

Contented mood of peacetime
Wearing silver things, musical like softened chimes
With a strong hand portrait
Rising through grey streams, of a course wondering

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-08-2004 11:09 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-09-08 07:34 AM


LeeJ
This mornings song is just beautiful and so are you.

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2004-09-08 08:21 AM


fitting fingers
of unmatched hands
til palms are friends

can feel the warm here
smooth like glass shoes

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-09-08 08:21 AM


so very beautiful Lee!  Good morning
Ericc
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4 posted 2004-09-08 01:54 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2004-09-11 01:46 AM


Loved every word LeeJ, especially this~

Moving down a fresh split road
From what strange arose

Drops of dust offer ready sighs
Cordwood for warm standbys

Such a nice thought that is~


passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-09-11 05:41 AM


you would be one person I'd love to have lunch with
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