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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-09-07 11:39 PM



"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2004-09-08 12:36 PM


Like this...James
Snow
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2 posted 2004-09-08 12:59 PM


thanks, james


snow

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3 posted 2004-09-08 01:13 AM


to singe your fingers
in the after thought,
of who wore the silhouette
beneath your sheets.


Love the above lines and the image behind them.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

froggy
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4 posted 2004-09-08 02:27 AM


Cool.

I like this one as it says many things.

:-)

iliana
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5 posted 2004-09-08 02:44 AM


So profound, Snow!  A black orchid?!  WoW!   .....jo
klm
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6 posted 2004-09-08 03:53 PM


under umbers expression.
rewiping my brow to engage in the thoughts provoked.

true talent

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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-09-08 03:57 PM


Very, very well written and presented Snow!!
Hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Susan
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8 posted 2004-09-08 04:28 PM


Your words wear a whisper that speaks deep-

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

sim0riah
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9 posted 2004-09-08 04:35 PM


Very nicely done..I'll have to figure out how to put visions with mine..

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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10 posted 2004-09-08 07:36 PM


who wore the silhouette
beneath your sheets.

Makes one wonder if they should take a new bed before a new lover so as not to incur thoughts of what lies thereunder.

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11 posted 2004-09-11 02:23 AM


You conjur up so many after thoughts, and always, you leave me reeling!

Brilliant poety, Snow~


Snow
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12 posted 2004-09-11 02:32 AM


i could explain it but i think that might ruin it... :-)

besides, i love seeing where my words take people.. and reeling, is wonderful!!!


thank you all so much !!


snow

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13 posted 2004-09-11 04:35 AM


that's awesome
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