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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-09-07 11:29 PM



What were those thoughts left
elemental tastes registered
a mental tongue footprint
brain database list
first impression
until the last


Whatever they were
they were recorded
kept for an urban solitude
as physical constraints shelter
and country air rests
as a rural circumstance....
have had that first impression
some removed from main byway
stalled for mid-afternoon tea
seated with scones at a Rye cafe
cups aglitter for the purpose
of infused enjoyment.

At a clatter of cutlery
that instant vanishes
at a conscious mark
the traveller embarks...
Elemental tastes were registered
new footprint replaces the last
another impression has been cast.



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (09-08-2004 12:43 AM).]

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2004-09-08 12:38 PM


so it has...James
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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2 posted 2004-09-08 01:01 AM


then, I must have left an impression..hehe


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-09-08 01:48 AM


Martin - Yes, this did leave an impression.  Very creative.   ....jo
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