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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-07 07:39 PM


Moonlight in Sonata
(In Her Arms)

In her arms
she is
so sweet to me.

In her arms
she holds me
so soft and tenderly.

In her arms
how preciously
she caresses me

until the dawn
when she kisses me
and sets me free

from the place that
I want to be
in her arms.

JamesLee
September03
2004

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1 posted 2004-09-07 07:41 PM


ahhh such a romantic


Kristabell
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2 posted 2004-09-07 07:43 PM


Very nice. So sweet she sounds.
ShiningWindHaze
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3 posted 2004-09-07 08:13 PM


Tender.

- Haze

Susan
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4 posted 2004-09-07 08:56 PM


James-  some day you shall sing an aria-

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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5 posted 2004-09-07 09:17 PM


I hear the soft music in this.  Enjoyed.
miscellanea
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6 posted 2004-09-07 09:51 PM


The title led me hear.  I'm glad it did.  This is such a sweet and gentle poem.

           miscellanea

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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-09-07 09:54 PM


Very soft and gentle James....lyrically beautiful.
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Margot
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8 posted 2004-09-07 09:54 PM


JamesMichael

Wonderful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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