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PazSqual
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2004-09-07 03:06 PM




I know I will never get to hold your heart
Yes, I have known it from the start
Still my feelings for you continue to grow
And I do not want to look ahead
To the day, when it is time for you to go


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-09-07 06:52 PM


Even in its brevity, a very genuine and heartfelt write.
TD

Kristabell
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2 posted 2004-09-07 08:19 PM


Wow! I have been on the other end of that stick. I was with someone who thought that, and he told me so. It is sad business. But I do not believe that he put his whole heart into the relationship because of that. I am not sure if that is good or bad? Nice right, though.

Kristabell

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3 posted 2004-09-07 08:20 PM


A very honest and truthful feeling that none
of us ever enjoys...

MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-09-07 08:21 PM


good write


iliana
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5 posted 2004-09-07 09:21 PM


Somethings, we just know, don't we?  Enjoyed.
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