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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2004-09-07 01:43 PM


As the last drop of rain
began its winding journey
down the clearing canvas
of my window,
I pictured you...
somewhere
between light and darkness
somewhere
beneath a sunlit sky
somewhere
without pain,
before clouds rolled in
bringing drops of rain.


© Copyright 2004 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-09-07 01:44 PM


Robert!  Welcome home!!!
I like these glassy images!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-09-07 01:49 PM


So dream-like and ethereal, yet vividly pictured in my mind. A lovely write.


EA


Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
3 posted 2004-09-07 06:55 PM


this was a poem i'm going to read again and again.

snow

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-09-07 07:15 PM


Robert!  So good to read you again!
And, this is SO beautiful!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Kristabell
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Portland, OR
5 posted 2004-09-07 08:01 PM


Ah, memories.

MGROVES
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california
6 posted 2004-09-07 08:08 PM


enjoyed


iliana
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7 posted 2004-09-07 09:26 PM


I feel the pain with this write.  So sad, but well said.   ......jo
miscellanea
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OH
8 posted 2004-09-07 09:45 PM


Partly Cloudy is a beautiful piece of art.  
           miscellanea  

Margot
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9 posted 2004-09-07 09:55 PM


Robert,

Heart touching, wonderful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

msflame
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10 posted 2004-09-07 11:09 PM


Robert, love the rain, love this!!!
soul drifter
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Colorado
11 posted 2004-09-08 04:34 AM


Hmm, I wrote a poem titled Partly Cloudy as well.

Yours is way better though.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
12 posted 2004-09-08 04:54 AM


It is raining here through the windows of my heart do I see the rain falling...

~love and hugs
~ARH

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