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Hey Mr. Truck Driver….

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Decaflame
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0 posted 09-07-2004 09:24 AM       View Profile for Decaflame   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Decaflame


Hey Mr. Truck Driver….


Now just because I was
decked out
in fabric of today
over youth
of yesteryear’s yearnings

was it
only my wanting imagination
allowing
possibilities that you, the
truck driver, stayed
just behind my right
car door

as we crept through
morning’s heyday

while my black
skirt
inched mid-high
just like it
did
yesteryear..

so…

was the view still worth it?

or did you play on the brake
like I played on the words...
© Copyright 2004 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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OH


1 posted 09-07-2004 09:30 AM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

So coy!  I love this!

   "or did you play on the brake
like I played on the words..."

                        miscellanea
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 09-07-2004 09:33 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

and to think I am in this lowslung boxer and can't even see in the window or your benz..
pout I want a truck

kewl stuff..playful naughtyness

enjoyed it
Kahlil
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3 posted 09-07-2004 09:34 AM       View Profile for Kahlil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kahlil

hee hee
it wasn't your imagination...

K
Earth Angel
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4 posted 09-07-2004 10:21 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I love your naughtiness! You wear it well!


EA
jellybeans
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5 posted 09-07-2004 10:24 AM       View Profile for jellybeans   Email jellybeans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jellybeans

*smiling* at this....seems years since truck drivers played on brakes for me *grin* but I still remember...you play the words well
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


6 posted 09-07-2004 10:59 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

"or did you play on the brake
like I played on the words..."

Enjoyed your naughty playfulness this morning.

I remember those days..thanks for the morning grins Deca girl!!

Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 09-07-2004 12:05 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

LOL love this!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
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8 posted 09-07-2004 12:25 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

grinning...well done
passing shadows
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displaced


9 posted 09-07-2004 12:48 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very cool
Susan
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walking the surreal


10 posted 09-07-2004 03:11 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Smiling here -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

scorpio
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right...there


11 posted 09-07-2004 03:25 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Way to get the motor running!!  

believe in what your heart feels...

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 09-07-2004 03:30 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Ya know,  I coulda swore I responded to this in the morning when I read it.  I know I told a few truck drivers I work with about it though....and yeppers, it is MOST definately the truth!  (they even admit it too...grinz...)
Mysteria
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13 posted 09-07-2004 03:34 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Inch away!  Very cute.
rwood
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14 posted 09-07-2004 04:43 PM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

I like the way you drive. Lil' playful convoy maker.

Reg~
Magnus
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15 posted 09-07-2004 05:22 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Deca,  this piece is so you...YES,  most
certainly...and no,  it wasn't me in that
truck...darn, darn, darn!!
Bonnie j
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16 posted 09-07-2004 05:28 PM       View Profile for Bonnie j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bonnie j

HeeHee Have a friend who drives a big ole bus.When I would ride with him. I'd sit and watch as he looked down and I would say.......
"Are you lookin' at the car or the girl........?"
Guess what he would say..............
Lol
BonBon
Dark Angel
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17 posted 09-07-2004 05:31 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wooohooo, sexyyyy.

Smiling wide here.

Enjoyed Deca.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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on the threshold of a dream


18 posted 09-08-2004 01:52 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL... summer's end gets some extra sizzle! *S* I enjoyed this very much! *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (09-08-2004 03:24 PM).]

Ratleader
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19 posted 09-08-2004 01:58 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Home for lunch...and a treat! Now go get back in my truck and hit the road....dum-de-dum....thinking.....

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kayjay
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20 posted 09-08-2004 05:13 PM       View Profile for kayjay   Email kayjay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kayjay

The hem of skirt keeps men alert
and wakeful to the road.
So wear it proud and shout it loud
You're helping safety's code.

Nicely provacative.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Interloper
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Deep in the heart


21 posted 12-11-2005 12:44 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Yes!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Artic Wind
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22 posted 10-27-2007 05:38 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

yet again another powerful poem to me

ARCTIC WIND
 
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