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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2004-09-07 09:24 AM



Hey Mr. Truck Driver….


Now just because I was
decked out
in fabric of today
over youth
of yesteryear’s yearnings

was it
only my wanting imagination
allowing
possibilities that you, the
truck driver, stayed
just behind my right
car door

as we crept through
morning’s heyday

while my black
skirt
inched mid-high
just like it
did
yesteryear..

so…

was the view still worth it?

or did you play on the brake
like I played on the words...

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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
1 posted 2004-09-07 09:30 AM


So coy!  I love this!

   "or did you play on the brake
like I played on the words..."

                        miscellanea

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-09-07 09:33 AM


and to think I am in this lowslung boxer and can't even see in the window or your benz..
pout I want a truck

kewl stuff..playful naughtyness

enjoyed it

Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-09-07 09:34 AM


hee hee
it wasn't your imagination...

K

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-09-07 10:21 AM


I love your naughtiness! You wear it well!


EA

jellybeans
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5 posted 2004-09-07 10:24 AM


*smiling* at this....seems years since truck drivers played on brakes for me *grin* but I still remember...you play the words well
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-09-07 10:59 AM


"or did you play on the brake
like I played on the words..."

Enjoyed your naughty playfulness this morning.

I remember those days..thanks for the morning grins Deca girl!!

Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
7 posted 2004-09-07 12:05 PM


LOL love this!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-09-07 12:25 PM


grinning...well done
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-09-07 12:48 PM


very cool
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
10 posted 2004-09-07 03:11 PM


Smiling here -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
11 posted 2004-09-07 03:25 PM


Way to get the motor running!!  

believe in what your heart feels...

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2004-09-07 03:30 PM


Ya know,  I coulda swore I responded to this in the morning when I read it.  I know I told a few truck drivers I work with about it though....and yeppers, it is MOST definately the truth!  (they even admit it too...grinz...)
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British Columbia, Canada
13 posted 2004-09-07 03:34 PM


Inch away!  Very cute.
rwood
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Tennessee
14 posted 2004-09-07 04:43 PM


I like the way you drive. Lil' playful convoy maker.

Reg~

Magnus
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15 posted 2004-09-07 05:22 PM


Deca,  this piece is so you...YES,  most
certainly...and no,  it wasn't me in that
truck...darn, darn, darn!!

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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Ohio
16 posted 2004-09-07 05:28 PM


HeeHee Have a friend who drives a big ole bus.When I would ride with him. I'd sit and watch as he looked down and I would say.......
"Are you lookin' at the car or the girl........?"
Guess what he would say..............
Lol
BonBon

Dark Angel
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17 posted 2004-09-07 05:31 PM


Wooohooo, sexyyyy.

Smiling wide here.

Enjoyed Deca.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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18 posted 2004-09-08 01:52 PM


ROFL... summer's end gets some extra sizzle! *S* I enjoyed this very much! *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (09-08-2004 03:24 PM).]

Ratleader
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19 posted 2004-09-08 01:58 PM


Home for lunch...and a treat! Now go get back in my truck and hit the road....dum-de-dum....thinking.....

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kayjay
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Oregon
20 posted 2004-09-08 05:13 PM


The hem of skirt keeps men alert
and wakeful to the road.
So wear it proud and shout it loud
You're helping safety's code.

Nicely provacative.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
21 posted 2005-12-11 12:44 PM


Yes!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
22 posted 2007-10-27 05:38 PM


yet again another powerful poem to me

ARCTIC WIND

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